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Wednesday, 20 August 2014
Learning to use different language features.
I use hook in my writing so people will get interested in my writing. I use a hook for my story about my lava lamp. I used onomatopoeia to make my reader interested. I found it easy because I know what happened. My next step is to use detail.
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Well done Erik, you have included a wonderful simile in your writing and you have put a lot of effort into reading it aloud with expression. Keep up the good work.
1 comment:
Well done Erik, you have included a wonderful simile in your writing and you have put a lot of effort into reading it aloud with expression. Keep up the good work.
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