Wednesday, 20 August 2014

Learning to use different language features.

I use hook in my writing so people will get interested in my writing.  I use a hook for my story about my lava lamp.  I used onomatopoeia to make my reader interested.  I found it easy because I know what happened.  My next step is to use detail.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Well done Erik, you have included a wonderful simile in your writing and you have put a lot of effort into reading it aloud with expression. Keep up the good work.